DoormanDan

Hey, VegasLights! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts on this piece! I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed my usage of more....unusual words. One goal of mine is to ...

Hey, Thisislegacy. Thanks for reading! True, the average person isn't going to understand half the words I use in my writing, but that's just how my style is. My goal ...

Hey there LadyShadows, thanks for the honest review! To address your points, first off, it's impossible to tell because this site won't let me format my work the way I ...

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece so much. Thanks for reading. :)

Hey there Bookish. Thank you for the honest review!! I'm curious as to why you think the rhyme is forced though. Everybody else who has read this thinks otherwise. I'm ...

Hey there Sheyren. Sorry for the late response and thanks for the honest review! To address your points, the whole point of the perspective change is to refer to a ...

Hey there, thanks for the review. I'll admit, when I wrote this, the method by which I was writing beats was generally just write it to the beat of the ...

Thank you so much for reading this piece and giving your opinion. I will admit, as much as I like how this piece turned out, that line you mentioned is ...

Hey there ScarlettFire. Thank you for the honest review. At this point, I'm pretty aware that I could make this more than what it currently is. The thing is, I'm ...

As a songwriter myself, I always enjoy seeing what others bring to the metaphorical table. To start with, I love the title. Those two words really work well together, and ...

Hey there, Lumi! Thank you so much for this honest review! I'm aware that this piece isn't as fleshed out as it could be, and that is because I wrote ...

Well, I'm very happy to hear that you think so highly of this little poem. I had just learned about steampunk before writing this, and was very inspired by what ...

And there is most certainly nothing wrong with being peculiar (as long as ya don't go burning houses down, that is)! I could relate to almost every line (ESPECIALLY the ...

Well, this is certainly a late response! I'm only just coming back to this site now, so sorry about that. Anyway, to start, I want to say thank you for ...

You really nailed it on the head with this review. Indeed, even though the girl was stalking me, I don't harbor any hard feelings towards her. As a matter of ...