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Djinn

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Prologue, The Name Game

    Holy... Okay, I think that was one of the best things I've read on here. I look forward to reading the rest but this was absolutely amazing. It reminded me ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Roses

    Oh gosh, I love it! It's simplistic in allegorical context but I fell in love with the writing and rhyming you weaved into it. I don't know how much of ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Piper

    Hi Queen of Hearts! So I'm a little rusty on reviewing so forgive me for any repetition or convoluted ideas that don't make sense. First, I'd like to say I ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Star Gardens

    Oh, goodness! I'm blown away by the imagery and how absolutely marvelous it was. If ever I were to fall into another pit of reality and mundane drudgery I'll pull ...

    Nov 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: .

    Ah, so very refreshingly light yet dark. Despite the other reviews, I fully appreciate the odd filing as it makes it that much more humorous (like a cherry on top). ...

    Nov 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the sexual frustrations of a hummingbird

    Wow! Where do I begin? I really love the imagery you provide in you poem despite not knowing immediately what you were talking about and alluding to. With a title ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    "Hera's eyes were shred" you probably meant shrewd. "clouded by the aura of light" I actually really like this phrase. I've never heard light being called a cloud before but ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: A Test Day

    There are a lot of sentence fragments "I hate Sunday it's the worth day with Tuesday." not to say anything about the worth days but instead of using the word ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Mostly.

    Wow. That was very touching. I felt it was very personal so I don’t really want to go into any criticism. There were a couple of things that could be ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: As Long As It Lasts

    Hey, I've been having the same problem. Your work is really interesting but I won't be able to read all of it now and give you a detailed critique. The ...

    Jul 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ignore post. D:

    I give it five stars

    Jun 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: nothing

    Wow, I really liked this piece. I’ve seen other works from and since they all seem to be reviewed by several people I just picked my favorite one and decided ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Other Re: Sunburned

    Wow, that was epic. Thank you sooooo much for making vampires scary and not lovey-dovey and sparkling in the sunlight. I really appreciated it. I read this very happily, throwing ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: Religion supports and destroys the world

    Wow. It certainly looks realistic. Where do you live? I live in Florida and it seems like every map I see America is in the middle or at least right ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Script » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Author of Worlds Play

    So, the first thing I want to say is Holy Toledo! That is a lot of words…and pages. There are only a few comments that I really have, and other ...

    Jun 25, 2012


I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.
— Holden Caulfield