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Re: Mellow.
What I mean't by it was I didn't put it on here for critizing, But for the reader's enjoyment. :)
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Burning All My Memories
Ello there! I thoroughly enjyed your poem, but a few things. Somehow in the chorus, "So Easily." Doesn't seem to fit well. Maybe because of length.. Maybe do something like, ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Startling Presence.
Thanks, everyone for this helpful stuffs. :D
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: A dark dream I had
Some of it rhymed, some didnt.' That confuses me... Otherwise, I liked it, 8/10
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Teenager
I liked the last part, How all the poem its like, I'm not that old.... Then the last one... I AM that old. :)
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Accident
I enjoyed reading this poem, I loved all the details. And Everything. [[Heey, I liked this poem!]] Get the point? I don't have anything bad to say about it! 10/10!
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Lies
Oh my God. I love this poem. 10/10.
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Perhaps..
Perhaps I love this poemm. xD That would be oh.so.correct.. :wink:
Apr 10, 2008