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Hello! A single tear traced a path down his cheek. “But perhaps soon I will,” he whispered. Whoa! The sense of finality in that sentence! Anyway, this piece made me ...

Hello! I remember reading the first two Unwanteds books a few years ago. The covers were always so visually appealing. :D Still, I never did get around to finishing the ...

Hey, I saw this in the Green Room, and I thought I would try my best to review it (or give my thoughts)! ...Linred is a psychopathic drifter. He has ...

my heart is one with the air and the music and the sound of drums racing through the floor. My favorite section ^ I wish I could review this through ...

She locks eyes with the wyvern in front of her, sky blue gaze holding nothing but calmness in face of such peril. I agree this reads a bit awkward. I'm ...

The last bus for the night had already been. It had already left? This read a bit awkward. The music was comforting, like a woolen quilt in the winter. It ...

OOh, I like the theme music! So dramatic! She walked through a white door into a white room. Nothing more, nothing less. Just a white room. Interesting start. I want ...

Wow! This story took me by surprise big time! Also, I loved the description of the city in the beginning because it reminded me of New York (not that I've ...

A very calming chapter. I haven't read the other chapters yet, so I'm sure things are not always so peaceful. "Alright, but be careful out there," he said, a worried ...

Okay, first things first. I really like unique names so Alsari and Quint sound so cool! I am jumping in midstory, but Etherian Academy sounds shifty. Alsari’s expression became bitter ...

Hi!I am not a poetry writer, so I can only say my thoughts as a simple reader. I liked all the references to the light-weighted or floating things I guess, ...

Great start! I like how this began with the bespectacled tour guide telling about the Grey Lady. As the last of the group hurried out of the wrought-iron gate, I ...

“Those food substitute things that mean you no longer need to eat me,” Steve explained, “We wouldn’t be having this conversation without those.” That's real interesting. Frogs and monkeys wo

I wish I could critique this as someone knowledgeable about poetry, but just as a simple reader, I really liked this. I loved all the wordplay having to do with ...

I am jumping in midstory (well, it's kind of part two), but I am already interested! Moya and Kumara...The names are really pretty too! They were the symbol of beauty, ...