Desire

HI :) THis poem was short but very powerful! This is the way I interpreted it: You are asking God not to send you to hell even though you mess ...

Hello there :) I'll do my best to give you the best review possible - hope it helps you out a little bit :) In the first stanza you used ...

What an adorable poem!!! This is one of my favorite poems that I've read lately! It's really just absolutely adorable (excuse the redundancy, rather look at it as an emphasis ...

This was such cute poem :) I really enjoyed the story that you told in it and was just really lovely to read - one of those "feel good" poems! ...

I can't see any changes that need to be made in this poem! Although I am not a muslim, I enjoyed this poem. I love it when people express how ...

I really enjoyed this poem :) Well done! You have portrayed such an important message here, one that I believe many girls need to hear. I thought your writing was ...

I like the story in here :) I was a bit confused in the beginning but I think it's about a girl who gets attacked by her mom because her ...

I found this poem really really amazing! Your vocabulary is very good and the image you created here through your words was brilliant! You have such potential and if you ...

What a thought! haha, this is definitely a poem that causes one (maybe those that aren't so strong in their faith) to question life, it's purpose and whether it isn't ...

I'd have to agree with the first reviewer! You have such potential and I can see you growing so much as a writer in the future! This piece really is ...

This was beautiful. You've emphasized the sadness through the repetition of the words "crying, crying softly". You couldn't have really used any synonym for crying cuz if you used sobbing ...

A great message! Very good protesting against how "fate" would bound you to living only a certain bit of life when you know that you are capable of so much ...

This piece is filled with truth! There are alot of spelling and grammer mistakes but who cares - you wrote an amazing piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading - thank ...

I'd like to give you a good review but am struggling to understand the poem. Maybe it would be easier if I knew who Freudian phalli is... I never did ...

Wow... alot of anger portrayed in these lyrics! I got the impression that you were speaking about someone you really loved but all the bullsh#t just messed up your relationship ...