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Re: Chicago Chapter 12
Hello there, and a very happy Review Day to you! This is Desdemona of Team Team Team, which isn't even a typo. Anyways, let's get to business. Marc stood up ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: .
Hi there! Desdemona of Team Team Team (not a typo) here to drop a review! Wow :) A Star Wars fanfiction that doesn't suck or bore! What a rare, and ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: 12 Sorrow
Hello there! Desdemona of Team Team Team (Not a typo!) is here to drop an itty bitty review :p You must forgive me if I misunderstand anything, because I am ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Billi Wack - Chapter 1
Hello there, Desdemona, from Team Team Team (Not a typo) here to drop a review. Interesting, very interesting. I haven't encountered many 3rd person present tense stories. Those are very ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Jamaica: A phanfic
Hiya :) Desdemona of Team Team Team (Not a typo) is here to drop a review :P The Phandom is everywhere. This makes me really quite happy. However before I ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: 550 words from page 198 of ma book
Hi, Des from Team Team Team here to drop a review. No that was not a typo. Happy Review Day!!! Well. If you don't wish for something, like your abysmal ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 1
Hey hey :) Happy review Day!!! Desdemona of Team Team Team here to review you. (No that was not a typo.) This is a vaguely Percy Jackson-iesque piece of literature, ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: Making a Difference...How?
Happy Review Day :) Desdemona here to drop a review. Your story was, like Taha mentioned, hard to grasp. First I thought your characters were not human. Then I thougbt ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Hello there, Eros! This is Desdemona from "Desdemona's Brutally Honest Reviews" here for that review you requested. Well hmmmm... I have a few bones to pick before I can enjoy ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: A beautiful love story...
Hello there, Desdemona here to drop a review. Oh how I love cute little tales like this. They make me smile. Yours was no exception, I smiled. However I did ...
Jun 16, 2016 -
Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1 *Edited*
Hello :) This is Desdemona, and she sure is sorry for dropping by a little late. I've been having exams all this time, and just finished by work with them. ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: Starlight: Prologue
Hiya! Desdemona here to drop a review :) What an interesting chapter! Foreign names, extra terrestrial places... Combined with your skills, this work is promising and has potential! All we ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: 1200 words from page 181 of ma book
Hi there, Desdemona here for a quick review. I'm sorry for not being able to find the time to review your work; I have only just finished my exams :P ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: The Beginning of the Duchess
Hiya, Elisabeth :) Desdemona here to drop a quick little review. Hmmm... How very intriguing. I thought this would be some sort of a weird royalty series (Duchess.) but boy, ...
Jun 5, 2016 -
Re: The Strays, Chapter One
Hiya :) Desdemona here for a quick review. Interesting, very interesting. I have, as I always do after reading well-crafted first chapters, millions and millions of question marks in my ...
Jun 5, 2016
