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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Chicago Chapter 12

    Hello there, and a very happy Review Day to you! This is Desdemona of Team Team Team, which isn't even a typo. Anyways, let's get to business. Marc stood up ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: .

    Hi there! Desdemona of Team Team Team (not a typo) here to drop a review! Wow :) A Star Wars fanfiction that doesn't suck or bore! What a rare, and ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Dramatic Re: 12 Sorrow

    Hello there! Desdemona of Team Team Team (Not a typo!) is here to drop an itty bitty review :p You must forgive me if I misunderstand anything, because I am ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Billi Wack - Chapter 1

    Hello there, Desdemona, from Team Team Team (Not a typo) here to drop a review. Interesting, very interesting. I haven't encountered many 3rd person present tense stories. Those are very ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Jamaica: A phanfic

    Hiya :) Desdemona of Team Team Team (Not a typo) is here to drop a review :P The Phandom is everywhere. This makes me really quite happy. However before I ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: 550 words from page 198 of ma book

    Hi, Des from Team Team Team here to drop a review. No that was not a typo. Happy Review Day!!! Well. If you don't wish for something, like your abysmal ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 1

    Hey hey :) Happy review Day!!! Desdemona of Team Team Team here to review you. (No that was not a typo.) This is a vaguely Percy Jackson-iesque piece of literature, ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Making a Difference...How?

    Happy Review Day :) Desdemona here to drop a review. Your story was, like Taha mentioned, hard to grasp. First I thought your characters were not human. Then I thougbt ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...

    Hello there, Eros! This is Desdemona from "Desdemona's Brutally Honest Reviews" here for that review you requested. Well hmmmm... I have a few bones to pick before I can enjoy ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A beautiful love story...

    Hello there, Desdemona here to drop a review. Oh how I love cute little tales like this. They make me smile. Yours was no exception, I smiled. However I did ...

    Jun 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1 *Edited*

    Hello :) This is Desdemona, and she sure is sorry for dropping by a little late. I've been having exams all this time, and just finished by work with them. ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Starlight: Prologue

    Hiya! Desdemona here to drop a review :) What an interesting chapter! Foreign names, extra terrestrial places... Combined with your skills, this work is promising and has potential! All we ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: 1200 words from page 181 of ma book

    Hi there, Desdemona here for a quick review. I'm sorry for not being able to find the time to review your work; I have only just finished my exams :P ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Beginning of the Duchess

    Hiya, Elisabeth :) Desdemona here to drop a quick little review. Hmmm... How very intriguing. I thought this would be some sort of a weird royalty series (Duchess.) but boy, ...

    Jun 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Strays, Chapter One

    Hiya :) Desdemona here for a quick review. Interesting, very interesting. I have, as I always do after reading well-crafted first chapters, millions and millions of question marks in my ...

    Jun 5, 2016


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