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Re: deleted
So this is strong! Many can realte to this I believe and you truly get your message through. To me, the flow and rythm worked but I'd like some puntucation ...
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Re: I Can See
Heeyy you! I'm Demoness, here's my review! Hm.. this may be repetative and didn't consist of any imagery or imaginary at all.. Still, I wasn't disturbed by this, it was ...
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Re: deleted
Neey, this is sad! I want to read more though so I guess it's good :D I loved that thing with "big things" and "little things" it was a sweet ...
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Re: Living in Sorrow
Heey, I'm Demoness and here comes my opinion on this piece! ( I promise not to comment on the punctuation! ) Soo, because I can't comment on the punctuation I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Daddy
Hellou, I'm Demoness and here's my review of your touchy little poem xD Easy to read, simple but full of emotion! - Yep that's pretty much what I gather from ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: A Body Shot
This is me, Demoness! I've come to give you my opinion on the piece you've written here :) Haha, I've never read a poem on a topic like this and ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: A girl with a song
Hello You! I'm Demoness and I'd like to give you my opinion on this little piece of yours. I can't live without music.. If my heart is what keeps me ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Princesses
This is Demoness speaking!!! I've come to give this piece my opinion... and adore it a little cause well, it deserves it :) Soo.. I must begin with telling you ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: For years.
Meeee... Demoness here, I've come to give you a review... or sort of just adore you! :D I'm truly speachless... I was too caught up and touched by this beautiful ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Four by Four lines
Hellouu, I'm Demoness and I've come to give you my opinion on your work! :) I'll begin with saying.. GREAT WORK! I liked them all alot, not equally much though. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Appearances
Hii, Demoness checking in to see what you have to say! Overall I think this was a great poem. It wasn't very deep or complicated - the opposite really, very ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The World is Turning Red
Hii, I, me, not we, is Demoness and I'll be giving you my opinion on your work!! :) I L O V E:d it! Truly amazing imagery, your give such ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Down In The Deep
It's meee! and... Here comes my opinion! Okay so... not only are you an amazing novelist but you can write even better Poetry.. You're truly gifted girl! Haha, I loved ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Of Fire and Shadow
Hii, I'm Demoness and I'll be giving you my opinion on this piece :) Hope I can be of help. CUTE! I liked it alot, great imagery! I don't know ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Suffocating
Hii, I'm Demoness and i'll be giving you my opinion on this piece! :) Overall I thought this was... No i can't begin like that because it sounds like there ...
Jul 31, 2011