Demoness

Devan! You're an amazing poet! I was impressed with you last poem, blind, but now I read this one and was even more stunned! This poem tells such a great ...

Hellue So this is creepy and dark... very dark... but I really enjoyed reading it! It's written in a way that kept me hooked all the way through, the lines ...

Kyllorac! This is absolutely amazing! I LOVE the imagery in this piece it's very vivid and powerful. I also like your style of writing and how you mix like, well, ...

Hii you! In the spirit of review-day I've come to inflict my opinion on your piece! So, I shall begin with saying that I really enjoyed reading this poem. You've ...

Hi Lindsie! At your request I came to give my opinion on your work. I'll begin with saying this was a really good piece, I like how original and different ...

Hey you! First review in weeks and I'm happy I stumbled upon yours! This was sooo beautifully written, amazing desriptions - you really managed to make this vivid and alive ...

Hi, as requested here comes the review! I've been having troubles with my head for awhile now so my eyes and mind can't really concentrate or focus on any kinds ...

Hi Kagii! My head is cured and I'm back to reviewing! I don't usually review short stories and stuff since I personally think I'm better at reviewing poems but I ...

It's me Demon again... And QARA you're an amazing poet. They're also sweet and beautiful and romantic without being to deep and heartwrenching... They're just cute and lighthearted and I ...

The endless face of black , Sprinkled with white freckles . The canvas for the earth , Sphere of life in a silent galaxy ,. A massive perfectly-curved marble , ...

Qara, I found another piece of yours! I love these short, sweet poems of yours :) I'm walking through these empty halls , filled with memories of you , S ...

Haiii! This was a sweeeet poem... Lighthearted yet it went to some sort of depth towards the end xD I don’t cry over spilt milk, It’s just not my style ...

Hellååå! I'm Demoness and this title lurked in the corner of my eye so I thought I'd check it out! * My first impression though - "God this is messy" ...

Qaraaaa-TheConfusing-Goodsider whodoesn'tlikesoda! It's Demoness and here's my rewiew! xD I thought you hated me , I thought you were a jerk . You had all these lame pictures , with ...

Aow, this so very beautifully written! Your use of words, and the way you build up yours sentences, each line is as powerful and I was hooked after the first ...