Demoness

Finally! (Oh, hey, it's me Demoness by the way!) So, I was really intrigued in the beginning, I thought like. "Aah, finally some action" but I kinda suspected it was ...

Hi! I'm Demoness and here's my review of you beautiful poem! Deception is here, Deception is there, Deception is with her, Is there a truthful place? I sail in these ...

For a prologue this is all it is supposed to be! It's mysterious yet intiguing and it most certainly leaves the reader wanting to know more! I, for one, would ...

I promised to give you a review... I open your portfolio - And find this :) I'm glad I did though since Robert Frost "Fire and Ice" is my number ...

Okay, so the DramaLlama grasped most faults and flaws and also alot of the things that was good with this. I don't agree with her on how she wanted you ...

Hey, so, I usually don't go in to nitpicking stuff but since I'm first to review this thing, I will do so today! I'm afraid there were quite many grammatic ...

Hm, so this wasn't too bad! It was pretty good actually, maybe even great! I do though agree with what others have said - you rely too much on your ...

Hello! My favorite Rival! Here I've come to review this piece of yours! So I'll begin to say that this was both intriguing and amazing and cute at the same ...

This was amazing! It's such a reappearing event, and I think you made a great job in grasping the full meaning of this. The way you wrote it made the ...

Aaow, yes, I agree with Passion! This is so cute, sweet, innocent and yet so Powerful! Good strucutre, flow and rythm and no flaws with the punctuation. It was a ...

Love, love, love! This is the sort of poetry I love reading, when the rythm and flow is impeccable, the structure of the stanza's keep its pattern and no rhymes ...

Okay so Demeter made a quite full blown review here with grammatic stuff and all so I will just state my overall impression of this. - I like the twist ...

Hello, this was quite intense to say the least! I don't like the attitude most people with eating disorders have, how they just let everything get to them and how ...

I like your idea of true hapiness! Being a happy, careless, innocent little child - but if that's what your inner heart most desires you at least have the luck ...

I began reading this a couple of weeks ago and was fascinated then! I read it now again and was even more compelled! I like your title alot at first ...