Demoness

Wicked Good! You've really turned the inside on a family out and I like how you in each stanza both describes what these people are like to other people. Like, ...

Haha, you're really brave to write about a topic like this! It's something like.. half of the population on earth should be able to realte to yet it's such an ...

So Hello! I'm Demoness and I've brought all my spiders so that I can give you a review of my best ability! So I'll begin with the things that could ...

Naooow, This is SUCH A beautiful poem. You use simple but powerful imagery and symbolism and same time you deliver a very improtant message. This is one of those poem ...

Heya! The Demoness and all her spiders is here to give you an opinion on this piece! So.. I like the structure in the last poem better since it flows ...

Okay so.. This was just remarkably gooooood! The ending was just so unexpected yet it made so much sense! I read this entire thing thinking it was just some mumbling ...

This is an amazing poem! To manage keeping that great flow and rythm and same time manage with the rhymes must have take quite an effort but it certainly paid ...

Hello! So, this truly was a whole bunch of questions... but personally I don't find anything wrong with that. Poetry can be written in many ways and even though your ...

Basically... I was gonna say exactely what "Charade" said... Loved how you bound the first and second stanzas together! My favorite lines were; “Wake, Wake in the night. Breathe, Breathe ...

QARA! Hellue! You managed with the 4line-stanzas! And you managed well! Good job! Also, AMAZING, GREAT, AWEGREAT Imagery and description and stuff! This piece is really, truly vivid! I only ...

Woaah! THIS IS AWEGREAT! So simple, yet so complicated... I loved it, so powerful and amazing. Every line seems to have been carefully, and throughtfully written and well, AMAZING! The ...

Wow, you really managed to fit the best words on those few lines! I love the symbolizm you used it was just brilliant! I can't complain on much since both ...

Quick, simple and plain - yet quite powerful. The flow was a bit choppy in the middle but overall it went on well and I'm glad you used punctuation :) ...

Hello my Ally! You say this piece needs reviewing... but I cannot agree. Good structure, no flaws neither when it comes to flow nor rythm. Even with my looking-glasses on ...

Aoow, short, sweet, simple and plain but yet so powerful! I love the little metaphors and even though, as Hayley said, a little more emotion wouldn't hurt this didn't had ...