Demoness

Geeh, I've never read anything quite like this! I loved it! I've been thinking of something similar to this, but I'm glad I never wrote it down because I couldn't ...

Okay so I thought this was quite lovely... I mean it didn't say that much and maybe you should have tried to mash something of greater importance into this and ...

Oh, so yes this was dark but still sweet somehow... This wasn't meant to go to deep into the words so I'm not gonna complain on the lack of depth ...

WOW! This is really, really beautiful! Your choice of words, the rythm, the imagery, the structure and stanzas.. it was all just amazing! I'm sure this is not flawless but ...

Heey! The content of this is great and very cute! Obviously there's alot of grammatical errors and lack of capitals and stuff but since it's not your work and was ...

Danii! I love reading your poetry, it's never the same! This piece had great imagery and descriptions and I loved these two lines "Mother was engaged to suicide, and in ...

Hey! This isn't bad for a beginner! You're a creative writer and the simplicity of this is really great, I like how it's... ehm plain. You express the situation and ...

WoW..! For saying so little, this poem really says alot! I loved it, the way you wrote it and the simplicity of a subject that seems to go so much ...

Oh Hellåå! This is Demoness and I'm here to give you my opinion on this piece of yours! To begin with... I like how every line starts with "I" it's ...

Lost in a sea of strangers Silently they call my name Hands grasping onto me pulling me in many directions Soft sobs of indecision Love always comes with pain So ...

Aow, this is a beautiful poem! I agree with previous speakers that you've got some truly amazing imagery. You use good rhymes that helps ease the flow instead of disrupt ...

Haha, this is funny! I'm so swapping myself over to the catagorie of "potterheads" I don't find anything in particular that I feel you should change. I mean I could ...

So this is dark and devious. . . BUT I LOVED IT! Intriguing content with both darkness and love! Wonderful! I think it flowed pretty well, not prefectly but not ...

Hellå! Very vivid piece you've got here, I admire your creativity! You've also managed creating a great rythm and flow with your rhymes while still keeping it non-forced! Great work! ...

Aow! I lovelovelove the flow and rythm of this piece! It's just so delightful to read! It may have begun quite cliché but the rest of the content was written ...