Demeter

Hey :) Hmm. I felt like the poem left me a little confused. Or, at least the first stanza; how it connects with the others and all. There's something in ...

Hi, Jared! I'm sure you want me and everyone else to be honest, so I just have to say this wasn't the most amazing poem ever. Personally, I prefer your ...

Hey, Alainna! I'm so glad Lyla's back in the business :) Thanks for informing me! to the boy sat across the room from me I think it's, "the boy who ...

Hey! Thanks for letting me know about the new chapter :) Oh nooo! This is getting really freaky. Luckily, it's 2 pm and the sun is shining, otherwise I couldn't ...

Oh, how beautiful! Really, I liked this very much, even though it was such a short piece. There is a little melancholic atmosphere and pretty imagery, which I like much. ...

Hi SFB and welcome to YWS! :) I think this poem was rather good! I'm not sure whether or not to be annoyed by the constant repetition of "Enter the ...

Hey, dailystatic! First of all, I just got to say that you're supposed to do two or more reviews before posting any of your own work. That is just because ...

Hi! You've got a nice idea here, and some good lines, too, but I felt that this piece lacked the wittiness of rhymes and like the ability of surprising the ...

Alright, so here I am again. ;) any-one's no-one Ditch the hyphens and write them like this: "anyone's" and "no one". exaggerating the vowels in my name till it sounded ...

Hey again! I blushed red This seems a little funny, seeing as people usually always turn red when they're blushing :) But it's not incorrect, so you might as well ...

Hello, Sarah! The length of this chapter was great! (I don't like too long chapters, especially if I have to read them on computer.) She was slight I think a ...

Hey, Sarah! I thought I would take a look on some of your work, because you've been reviewing mine religiously :) Thanks for it! So... let's get started. I kind ...

Hey there, aestar! I really liked the idea of criss-crossing. I think you should really take advantage with Sapphire's suggestions, because they were really good! Standing on the wet, cold ...

Hey, angel19 (and welcome aboard)! First, I have to point one thing out. It seems you haven't done any reviews yet, and here in YWS we have the kind of ...

Hey, Jared, and thanks so much for letting me know about this! :) Alrighty then. I wouldn't have guessed that I'd like a chapter that's all about farting. Haha. :D ...