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Moonlit Waltz
Waltzing a tap dance
In a garden
Made of moon-gleam
Leaves of silver
Wind-swept hair
A single tear
Glistening as it falls
To frosted ground
Dancing alone
With uncertain steps
Unknowing audience
Trees swaying
A secret whispered
On the wind
great poem. nice, easy but powerful and full of imagery. one can feel different emotions while reading this peice. its light reading for the light hearted and free spirited. it also has a myterious feel to it. kind of like a secret. great peice i wouldnt change a thing. every time read again it just gets better. keep it up !!!! awesome job!
Very nice...
I like the simplicity of it, and it does get a definite emotion across.
I agree with Demeter with at least the word "Unknown" isn't quite right here, but I think "uncertain" might still be okay.
My only real qualm with this:
Waltzing a tap dance
Oh, how beautiful! Really, I liked this very much, even though it was such a short piece. There is a little melancholic atmosphere and pretty imagery, which I like much.
Waltzing a tap dance
uncertain
Unknowing
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