Demeter

Hello, BumbleBear! Sometimes life is a sea, deep, dark and black I think it would look better in two lines; you know, hit "enter" after the word "sea"? :) I'm ...

Hello, Caroline. The Friendship bracelet around my wrist its cutting off my circulation. The words noand stop mean nothing to you. Is there a reason why the "friendship" is capitalized? ...

Hello, BumbleBear! First off, I love the word "eagle". And the bird itself, too, mostly because of a lovely Abba song that's called "Eagle". Second off, I liked this poem ...

You're right, Clo! Why no one thought of that? :( Well, anyways, Conrad, well done. Of course, it would've been so much better if only I had been in it, ...

Moix. Huomasinpas nyt tämänkin sitten ja aattelin antaa rivjuun. :) First off, when I was reading this, it felt like the narrator was in a hurry, and tried to explain ...

Hi MADD94! Here by request ;) As I walk out the door and towards the fence to the right of the dumpster where I wait for the bus every day, ...

Ah, great. I really liked this. This was perfect for the mood I am now, which is tired, haha. But I know I would've liked this even though I wasn't ...

Hey oboemagic_1414! Welcome to YWS, by the way. We haven't met yet, have we? Well I'm Demeter, nice to meet you. :) Okay. Your poem was sweet, but I really ...

Hey there. I FINALLY managed to remember to read and review this. I'm sorry for not having earlier. So. I'm not much into fantasy-swordfight stories, but I notice you know ...

Hi Kaylyn. I liked the basic idea of the poem. It's actually true – how many really means it when they say I love you? When will guys ever learn? ...

Hey, Jared! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to review this – I haven't even been on for such a long time! So I just have to get used ...

Hi! Finally I had time to read this :D Sorry for not earlier. I liked this poem much! I love the lightness of it, and the subject is great. I ...

Yay, Eimear! You're back in the business! I partly agree with Cade here. I also wasn't so enthusiastic about the repetition. Then again, it kept the stanzas together. I tell ...

Hi, cathy! First of all, you should change the title. I think you meant "Losing You", not "Loosing". :) My bestfriend collapses limp in my arms. I search for the ...

I really hate to admit this, but the only reason I borrowed Stormbreaker from library and actually read it, was because I thought the movie Alex was so cute. (!) ...