Demeter

Hi Joanne! Welcome to YWS! The pain of letting go of something, or maybe someone comma was exquisite enough to let me remember him for all of my life, where ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I love your username. I actually really liked this poem. This is a good example of how poetry doesn't have to be very complex and wordy ...

Hey, Mia. I think it's great that you turned your conflict into a poem. It's always nice to see people creating something out of certain emotions, instead of just wallowing ...

Hey there, Mel_! I like short and simple poems. In fact, I like poems that are done well. They can be short, or they can be longer – the most ...

Hey Blue. I have to say I quite liked this, because I'm a sucker for rhyming. :P I love it when rhymes don't sound forced, and I don't think they ...

Hey, Gun – here by request, even though this is quite an old thread... =P Let me nit-pick first. Tell me what you want to grow up and be? A ...

Hey, Pudin! Here by request! She felt awkward, a little out of place and unconscious Technically, in this case, awkward and out of place mean the same thing, so I'd ...

Hey, Aqua! Here I am as you requested, and earlier that I said I would be =) This is very descriptive piece, and I'd give full marks for you if ...

Hello, Shadow! I stare up At the world of color, It's warm softness Kissing my cheek. Hm, what exactly is warm softness? What does it feel like, other than warm ...

Hi, Mizz! This is such a feel-good poem. I liked the colour aspect – however, I don't know if its your problem or mine, but when you say blue, I ...

Hey, Janay! First of all, I think it's great how you've also thought about the music. I can't compose music to save my life, so it's admirable how some people ...

Heya Vera. I liked the Bliss aspect you had going on here. The chorus was more difficult for me to grasp than the verses; it seemed a bit like you ...

Hi Mandeyy! At first I want to say that the reason you haven't received more reviews is most likely the tiny font that few people will want to read. I ...

Hey, Zephy! So, the first piece of a novel, eh? I'll be interested to find out what will happen in the future, since this one seemed to be dedicated to ...

Hey Roon! Here I am as you requested. You had some great things going on in this poem. I especially liked the images that I like to call "meticulous," the ...