Demeter

Hey Ed! The bits I like best in this poem are those where I can think and that aren't thrown directly onto my face. These bits were "Hardwood floors/reflecting nonsense" ...

Hey Mo.! I thought that a strong rhyme was a good way to start the poem, but I would've wanted to see rhymes throughout the poem. To me it's all ...

Hey Rebel! Wow, it's very impressive that you have recorded the song as well! The genre isn't what I usually like to listen to, but I was glad to listen ...

Hey, Herzing! Nit-picky, pedantic stuff first: filled with a volcano, that erupts at black bird's twilight. There shouldn't be a comma after volcano, because, well, commas are not usually used ...

Hey Allison! Here I am, as I said I would be! :D First of all, the fact that it's based on Disney makes it automatically amazing. You've chosen a tricky ...

Hi, Ash! For someone who doesn't write much poetry (yeah?), this wasn't bad at all. It's much much better than my first poems, which I can't even bear to look ...

Salut, Le Poète Inconnu! You have no idea how much I want to write this review in French. But I won't do it. First off, I absolutely positively adore the ...

Hey, Man! What a night to behold, Watching the city lights glow Like stars and diamonds Sparkling, for the two of us alone. The problem of this first stanza is ...

My lovely lovely Cars. =D She claims she needs it, but I don’t understand why. I think you should maybe speficy that "it" is the music, because it took me ...

Hey Tiffany! Sorry that you've had to wait for so long! Gary tried to steady her as she sat back down. I wonder if she getting sick? Poor darling, I’ll ...

"Not my daughter, you [female dog]!" Hi Gal. I'm sorry that you've had to wait for this review, but seeing as you've received so many detailed ones already, I hope ...

Hey Forest, here as you requested. First of all, I want to repeat what JD said about the spell check, although I'm not sure if you fixed those already (I ...

Hey Mia, My favourite part about this poem was the so-called time travel; I liked how the soldier's viewpoint carried the story throughout the poem. I also always appreciate it ...

Hey, Mae! So, this was an interesting little piece of flash fiction. I'm intrigued about what made you want to write this piece, actually! Your writing is easy for eyes ...

Hey, MexDef. (First of all, try to make a clear division between your lyrics and author's notes.) The flow in this song is overall good. There are no major rhythm ...