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I once knew a Harmony, middle name was peace, and that’s exactly what she offered me.
Said if I was true maybe she would fall for me, and that if I was hers she would risk it all for me.
All for me, told me she would climb the tallest tree, upon the tallest tree, she spoke her heart to me.
Are you always gonna live half-heartedly? Open your eyes and maybe you will start to see.
She cut me deep, real deep tore an artery, Peace and Harmony isn’t what I thought it’d be.
Honestly, I wonder what she saw in me; every now and then I hear her voice calling me.
When she left it was like she took apart of me, Harmony she was the ending and the start of me.
Harmony, the rain falls as I weep, last names dream, only see her when I sleep.
The rain falls as I weep, her last names dream, only see her when I sleep.
Harmony…
Thanks, but it wasn't actually about a girl...
The song was a metaphor "Harmony" (first name) with myself is what I gained. "Peace" (middle name) is what that harmony gave me. Her last names "Dream" only see her when I sleep. (I lost that Harmony now I only feel at peace in my sleep)
Hip-hop doesn't always have to be about the things you hear on the radio, I'm glad you listened and I hope I cleared it up a little for you 
Hey Rebel!
Wow, it's very impressive that you have recorded the song as well! The genre isn't what I usually like to listen to, but I was glad to listen to yours because the lyrics worked much better when I heard them like that. I think you should maybe clarify, in an author's note or something, that this is a hip hop song or whatever you like to call it, because if I hadn't listened to the recording and known it was hip hop, I wouldn't have gotten it. At least I think so.
I once knew a Harmony, middle name was peace, and that’s exactly what she offered me.
she was the ending and the start of me.
last names dream
This is really good! I really liked it! 
The only thing is that it didn't really seem like a poem. It didn't have the flow of one. It was more like a short story.... just wanted to point that out because it bothered me. Other then that I really enjoyed it!
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