Demeter

Hey Kyllorac! Here as you requested! So, I can't really give this a proper review... the song has already been written, and because I don't know Korean, I can't tell ...

Hi Ben! Columns are a genre of writing close to my heart. I used to write these myself a lot, because there's few things that bring the real me out ...

Hey Jasmine! Here as you requested. I could never remember my parent's faces. They were murdered during World War Three in the Oxford Massacre on the fifteenth of April. The ...

Hi Kylan! Here I am! At first the changing points of view were a bit hard to follow, but then I got used to it. I water the tulips, bobbing ...

Hi Pudin! Here as you requested. You've gotten a lot of good and detailed critiques already, so I thought I would just tell you my general thoughts about this story ...

Hey, Kamas! Wow. I really enjoyed this poem. I could picture everything very clearly, and I absolutely loved the vocabulary you used here -- I also learnt a few new ...

Hey there, Lydia! I have to agree with Kat - while the full stops keeps the poem's rhythm up, they make it sound choppy and like there's no room for ...

Hi, Ella! There were many details in this song that I liked. The overall impression left me a bit unfulfilled, though – I felt like there were several things that ...

Hey, Kylan! This poem in general makes me happy, especially the ending. It's still not my favourite one by you, even though the quality's you through and through and you ...

Hello, Kate! Since this is so short, I'll go to the nit-picks straight away. while I was blissfully unaware sleeping in my bed. In my opinion, this would sound better ...

Hello Sacrifice. There were small droplets of sweat on his forehead and when he turned round he had a strange birthmark on his shoulder You can scratch the word "small", ...

So, JD. I don't think I've read anything by you before – or have I? First of all, I'm glad there's a story behind this story. Of course, it's unfortunate ...

Hello, TJ. It's difficult to write very short poems like this, because then you will have to pay even more attention to making everything count. I'm finding it a little ...

Oh em gee what's /this/? I really hope no one has reviewed this while I've been writing this, I want to have it first. xD Not that I have much ...

Hey, Nightowl! :) The title caught my attention, so I decided to drop by and have a look. All in all, I haven't read many lyrics on YWS, but I ...