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Hi Mkultra98, Wow, I really enjoyed this poem, I loved your comparisons to language and love, it truly is incredible. The punctuation in this piece, is also really well done, ...

Hi siddharthnair, This poem has a very interesting concept, I like your topic of what other people expect and want of you in life, and, in turn, your opinion of ...

Hi ShadowVyper, Wow, again! You've continued this story with just as much flare and raw intensity as before. Thank you again for the notice when you posted these pieces...and three ...

Hi Maverick, I've just read your poem Summer Gin, which was one of the best poems I've read on this site (in my opinion), but I enjoyed this piece even ...

Hey Bball41! :) I loved reading this piece! I love how happy it is, there is so much depressing and poignant poetry out there, that I think "Smile" is a ...

Hey joallover, Awwwww this is such a cute poem! And a fabulous dedication to mush

Hi ShadowVyper, Me again! Thank you for the message to alert me about the newest installation of the story! Again, I love the story, and as it progresses I'm getting ...

Hi Sunset101! :) Haha, this is such a nice, funny piece! Yes I think you were right about labeling this piece "realistic", it definitely is! And I think everyone can ...

Dear ShadowVyper, I really enjoyed this story, is this the first chapter or did I miss one? Only because the title says Chapter 2, but all I can see in ...

Dear Marissa, This is an unbelievable powerful piece, it is incredible. I was wondering, is this piece based on first-hand experience? It seems so raw, I feel as if I've ...

AHHHHH BooksAndDaisyChains!!! This story is getting better and better! Where is Chapter 5?! I just want to keep reading and reading and reading! Again, A few very minor changes to ...

Wow, still loving this story! Sorry it's taken my a few days to get back to it, but can't help getting annoyed this isn't an actual book I can finish...YET! ...

Dearest CatInTheShower, I have read your poem. I did not drown in the shallowness of your poem. It was beautiful, like words from heaven. You are brilliant, and that's all ...

Hi BooksAndDaisyChains, I noticed your fourth chapter of the Clepsedra in the Green Room, and so I'm starting from the beginning with Chapter one! I love the Aztecs, so I ...

Hi xJupiter, I was also wondering if this is a personal experience? If not, it's descriptive enough to pass as one! I usually don't like this much dialogue in a ...