Hi Mkultra98,
Wow, I really enjoyed this poem, I loved your comparisons to language and love, it truly is incredible. The punctuation in this piece, is also really well done, it leads you through the poem nicely.
I loved these lines,
"the grammar
of satisfied silence. "
"-to love you
to love you- the words run together like raindrops-"
"the vocabulary of rain and stars that drinks words to
stay fluent in loving oneself. "
They're brilliant, I envy your poetic flare, having said that, I'd love to read more of your work!
Please keep writing! and notify me if you publish any more
-theb00kthi3f
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