DelanieHeart

Erm... This is disturbing. Are Nick and Joe like... brothers? Okay, I guess I better review it then other than the fact that the characters in this story totally grossed ...

As they lay here thinking and looking at each other Searching for words buried under covers These words don't rhyme as perfectly as they should... But ha, the covers is ...

This girl is Fire and I am Ice, She radiates warmth- and I cold to entice. This confused me. How do you cold to entice? She melts my heart- I ...

If I had nine hearts Would it push me to love? Would it make me bear the gifts This sentence feels awkward here and seems too long. He sends me ...

No august prophet could have augured, Nor honest author could have portrayed, Love! The plangent sky that morning rang, The plagal tone those mourners sang. Hmm. Plangent and plagal are ...

Deep down inside they have not a heart This fell heavy when I read it aloud Their eyes pierce at me like frozen darts Pierce at me is just grammatically ...

Wow. As I read this the emotions just jumped out at me. This poems seems to be my life story, about cutting and all. My favorite line is this: My ...

The next morning Morlun and MJ arrived in Dresden comma Germany. The legend of Mephisto started here comma thus here is where the trial would start. Morlun and MJ checked ...

“Rise and shine!” sang Gracie gently remove the gently. It sounds odd. as she poured half a glass of ice-cold water, fresh from the brook around the back of the ...

The dull, rhythmical thuds of his footsteps, mixed with the cries of men outside, swelled around Godfrey’s ears. Continuing his monotonous pace, he gazed at the door at the end ...

I liked your story and I am excited to see where it goes. Here is the big long review you most likely were expecting. Your take on the characcters is ...

I liked your take on the story but you've really confused me. This isn't the Draco we know now or is porrtayed in the novels. He is whiny and Snape ...

Interesting. I like how the character kept emphasizing she didn't mean to go to Pandora; it was all a big mistake. Her curiosity is a very helpful tool you can ...

I enjoyed it, actually. Not a big fan of Aladdin although that's the school play we're doing this year. Anyways, enjoyed it and here's the big long review you've been ...

I liked your review, since I never got to go see the movie, and I enjoyed it. It was more of a review on the movie than a persuasive review ...