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Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Twelve
Hello! THE SUSPENSE. I can't wait to find out why Lewis pulled back, and how this war is going to end! I couldn't believe Dominic just gave up on the ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Part 0.5
Heya Goldflame! Sorry I'm so late >< And you've had such lovely reviews already *panics* what is there left to cover? I haven't read all of the previous reviews because ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 3 Part 1 - A Stirred Pot
Heya Messenger... I am half asleep so really, do excuse me if some of this doesn't make sense. I'll try my best! It was interesting to have a totally different ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch5 Part 3
Ooh this is the last chapter and then I am all caught up! Awh, it's so sad that this has added some tension on to their old relationship. I mean, ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Chapter 5 Part 2
Me again, Writer Girl ;) I like Noah. He seems like a gruff and interesting character, willing to answer questions but knowing that he is looked down on despite his ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch5 Part 1
Hello Writer Girl! Another day, another review :D Ooh I like this chapter. It's kind of humorous seeing Ember under sedative, acting all funny. It's very amusing and I think ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch4 Part 4
Hi Writer Girl! So this is the end of chapter four... it was interesting. I guess we learn that her captors aren't the smartest people in the world... kind of ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch4 Part 3
Writer Girl! DD: Some people are grabbing at her and she's in an unfamiliar place underground. Ooh I have no clue what is going to happy next and how Skylar ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch4 Part 2
Hello there Writer Girl! Good morning :D Ooh this was interesting. So Skylar has been up to something for quite a while... maybe the drama at the fourth ceremony was ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 2 - An Invitation to Mount Crusto
Heya Messenger! I'm ready to review... So the trick was kind of planned but also kind of an accident? I can see the meddle Castor has got herself into now. ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Chapter Three
Hello again Writers Girl! Me here :P I have to say, this was a very interesting turn of events. Thank goodness for blue eyed strangers right? At least he is ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Chapter Two
Hey there Writer Girl! (Can I call you that?) Whoa, this was a looong chapter. You should think of breaking it up and posting it in parts... also, it would ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Why Do You Get To Drive? (Chapter 2)
Deanie here again! Hehe, I like this chapter even more than the first! You put humor into your writing, as well as telling the story. It was kind of bugging ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Why Do You Get To Drive? (Chapter 1)
Hey there Sylar! Happy review day! I have to say, I picked this story by random choice. I love your flow when it comes to writing, it's so fluid and ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Spirits - Chapter 1
Me again c: Ooh the suspense! You can tell big things are going to happen to Keilei, and it will have something to with the Staeil she is so curious ...
Apr 27, 2014