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Re: Chasing Dragons- Chapter Two
Hey Stella! I am loving this so much. I like how you dove right into it, the opening line of the first chapter even questioning the whereabouts of the princess. ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Vampirisi;1.2
Hey Cesare! Glad to see another chapter up, and this new title is interesting. The idea of a half vampire and necromancer... I wonder if they get a standard amount ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Decision of Change, Pt. 5
Heya Timmy! You know that lovely er, shiny review I promised? It might be a little shorter than expected as well... this chapter was just too good. You had such ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 5)
Hey there Gaurav! Thank you for letting me know you posted another chapter to be read :3 All I have to say is wow. This was definitely a twist in ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Godtrust ~ Chp.3
Hey there Hightop! You were right - this is where it gets confusing. But confusing in a good way. It hasn't been confusing enough to turn me off from reading, ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Eight: Juno's First Day
Hello your highness! I like the twist in this here, of how not everything Asteria thinks is squished when it comes to rumours is actually not really squashed, just kept ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Vampirisi (Vampirial II); 1.1
Hey Cesare! I am here to review the beginning of the follow up story! I am glad to see you continue this and am interested to see what you hold ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Vampiral Final Chapter
Hey Cesare! This is the end! I am glad you were able to keep up with the novella for this long to finish it all. I am also looking forwards ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial 11
Hey there! Me again :3 Happy Review Day! [Again.] Well, that was quite the plot twist at the end! All of a sudden we can see ghosts, and there is ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial 10
Hey there Cesare! Happy Review Day! I am going to continue reading your story ;) This was a very interesting chapter. I liked how Nadiya ran to Viktor's body after ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: I never liked my hands
Me again Crimsona! ;) As always, have a Happy Review Day! I have to say I loved this poem all the more than the last. Don't you ever stop that ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The end of innocence
Hey Crimsona! Happy Review Day! I wanted to make sure I read those poems I had seen you post for today! I think this one is great! I love how ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Chapter 6 Part 2
Hey Writer Girl! Thank you for letting me know this was posted! Happy Review Day! I loved it. Now we get to see Skylar isn't hurt, know Lucas a bit ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Seven: Asteria's First Day
Hey your Highness! Thanks for reminding me to read this :) Happy Review Day! I don't have much to say on this chapter that needs improving, mostly because it was ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Belinda Cabbotry: A Different Perspective (PART 4)
Me again :3 I have even less to critique on this chapter. There were only two nitpicks and well, I loved this. Of course, you had a little Sherlock-like moment ...
May 25, 2014