Deanie

Hi r4p17! As always, it is my honour to read one of your chapters! I love that they are in the story world and it was so lovely when you ...

Hey there Silver! Happy review day! It was about time you posted another chapter for us ;) I loved it! It's interesting to see how you tied things together so ...

Hi there Shady! Happy review day! This is going to be crazy short, but only because this was crazy good! Honestly, I couldn't find a single fault in this. I ...

Hi there Traunt! Ooh those sisters. Trust me, I know how hard it is to get rid of them. I wonder how Xenia did manage to follow. But I'm glad ...

Hi there Bella! Happy review day! I guess we are getting to see more occasions where the Doctor was unbelievably cruel to Layla. I was surprised to know she was ...

Hi there 90skid! Remember me? Your novel's adoptive parent! who is taking forever to get through your chapters... What an interesting chapter. I am not sure how I feel about ...

Hi there Fortis! Ooh what an interesting chapter! We've now got a new aspect to this story going now. We're getting to see Cabot and his plan to go to ...

Hey there Meg! Ooh, so maybe Qui'in isn't actually telling us the truth about why she wears her veil. I have to say this was a brilliant chapter. I loved ...

Hai Timmy! Haha, it seems like that message at the end is something I would've needed to see ;) But actually, when it comes to this chapter I was very ...

Hi Aria! I have to admit - I don't really have much to say about this chapter. It was almost perfect in itself. Unlike the first one where I felt ...

Hi there Biscuits! I'm back again to be all caught up with chapters and see what happens to Dannel! I loved how this chapter opened with him attempting to write ...

Hey r4p17! Deanie here to review the next chapter! I am really looking forward to reading the next one! It seems like we have all the characters we're going to ...

Hi Traunt! This chapter was definitely delivered better than the previous ones! I barely found anything to nitpick at all so I am left to comment on the story along ...

Hi Bella! I really don't have that much to comment on! This chapter is pretty to the point, showing more of the area that Layla and Mercy have been left ...

Hi 90skids! It's me again, your adoptive parent. Here to try and give you another review! So far, we get to see a bit more of Rebecca's character in this ...