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Hi Fortis! Wow... this chapter hasn't left me with much to say. I had never really given much thought to how Fleta met Shep, or what she was like before ...

Hi 90skid! Oh wow, this was a chapter I just loved reading. What I liked so much about it had to be the goodbyes. I liked how she departed from ...

Hi Anabel! This is going to be a pretty short review, because reading this I find it hard to know what I would even consider changing. I think you did ...

Hi Yastika! I wasn't aware that this part was going to be completely separate from the rest of the story, but now that I do I will treat it like ...

Hi Serene! It was about time that I got round to one of your chapters. I will say that this took longer than I would like it to take for ...

Heya sis! It feels so good to be caught up with at least one of the novels I am following. So let's make this the best review that I can! ...

Hi sis! I am here to do my best for reviewing! I know this is only the first part of a chapter, and I found it to be much of ...

Hi Esca! Writing these reviews don't get any easier, and I like that because it means your writing is only getting better! I may be a bit behind when it ...

Hi Fortis! Ooh I didn't even think about the fact that his family might be on television looking for him as well. I totally forgot about all that >< Which ...

Hi Meg! Goodness, I am far behind. Oh well, let's do my best to catch up then. I just hope you didn't think I'd deserted your story ;) As always, ...

Hi Noelle! I am definitely going to have to keep this review short and sweet because there really isn't much for me to say here at all that hasn't been ...

Hi Timmy! I am not really sure what I should be saying here. Usually when I write a review I leave notes for myself as I read on things that ...

Hi Burrow! Happy review day! I am here just as you asked me to be. It might take me a while to get to the second chapter but I wanted ...

Hi Noaven! Happy review day! Of course I had to come and see what you're first chapter as like. I needed to review it today! I am happy to say ...

Hi 90skid! Happy review day! Oh wow, this was a very well written chapter! Honestly, yours just keep on getting better and better! I really like seeing more about these ...