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Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 3 1/2

    Shinda! Once again you've built a lot of good suspense at the end of your chapter so now I really want to read on, but I can't :( But I ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 2 2/2

    Okay this is interesting. I'm never usually the first person to review. I liked this chapter and finally I get to understand the connection between Kate and Jeffery. We also ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 2 1/2

    Shinda! Well I liked this chapter. Already things are processing. I'm left wondering what their world is like and what is going on. I want to know about their connection, ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 1

    Hey Shinda! Well I decided to read your novel from the start as I am not one to jump into things. I liked the beginning and I love how straight ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    Hi there! This poem was really deep and got your emotions across very clearly. As for title I would suggest: You'll never understand or My Drug. Well, what I didn't ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S.

    Muffins!

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: White Granite

    Hi there! I'm a big fan of Martin Luther Kind, and I am really happy because we are studying him at the moment in History. I think your poem is ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chips

    Hi Stella! I find it so awesome that you wrote about food! Especially chips. The way you wrote it left me drooling for the Christmas Holidays so I can go ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: assorted poems

    SPARKY!

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Bluebird

    Hi Snoink! I know this poem has a lot of reviews but I couldn't help myself and I'm sure one more doesn't a matter. This poem had such a wonderful ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Toxic Tongues

    Hi dogs! It's far by my turn to review something for you so here I am. Just like Bubbly (HPR) I am not really meant to be reading this, but ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fragments

    Hey there Scarli! :) *digs up old poetry* Okay so I found this was a very interesting poem. The first stanza was really interesting and I really wanted more but ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: It's okay to cry

    QARA QUEEN! + sister! I loved this little poem! It was really short, but I think writing short poems is a test. It's like trying to find out how much ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rainbows

    Hi persy! I love this poem to bits! It was so clever how you tied in the colours to demonstrate times, memories, feelings. It was such an enjoyable read. I ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    Hi! I think I half get this. I understand this person killed someone and feels terrible about it. I didn't get much more than that. But shoving aside the meaning, ...

    Dec 8, 2011


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