Published December 8, 2011
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Shinda!
But I will in the future. Remember to tell me when the next chapter comes out.
Once again you've built a lot of good suspense at the end of your chapter so now I really want to read on, but I can't
I now know Jeffery is a more happier person when he is on his own. Which is getting to know the characters even more... but I am still waiting for that explanation of why the city is under attack. I'm not usually one to be into all the fighting battle weapony stuff I'm reading right now but I do find it interesting enough. I'm anxious to finding out why Jeffery chose to go into battle when Kate was obviously in a better condition then him. And I also want to find out how Kate is getting on with her mission!
Lots to find out and already anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Deanie x