Hey Shinda!
Well I decided to read your novel from the start as I am not one to jump into things. I liked the beginning and I love how straight away there is action. I'm interested to see how Kate knows Jeffery. You did a good job of building suspense there because we hope that Kate can save Jeffery but we already fear that she might not. Hope and fear are the key elements and I think you displayed them really well.
Deanie x
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