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Hi Wanderjay, Let me just start by saying that this doesn't really fit into the essay section. I think that more so, it fits into the short story narrative section. ...

Hey Paris, What a wonderful poem! I really liked the whole imagery you created, and you described it beautifully. I also really liked the ending to the poem. It made ...

Hi there Xregion, So I've read a few others of these. It's an interesting concept: never meeting someone but still managing to fall for them. And I liked how Ariel ...

Hey there Rishabh, I liked this chapter again. I really like the openings to your chapters, how you start with Ratan's thoughts about various subjects that are relevant to the ...

Hey there again, Another brilliantly written chapter. The characters are still amazing and I'm still loving your realistic dialogue. You're a really great writer, y'know. Okay, I have a few ...

Hi Willow, Before I get into this review, I would like to mention that I did go back and read part one first. I also absolutely love your main characters! ...

Hey Lukacena, So I read the first part before reading this one, so it would make more sense. I must admit I've never played the game myself, but I know ...

Hi Kman, So I have mixed feelings about this piece. It was good, and you have an interesting idea here. I liked hearing Jake's and Xavier's backstories because I felt ...

Hi there Rishabh, I'm here to review the next chapter! Hmm, I think this is one of the chapters I liked the least. I think this is because I didn't ...

Hey Anadir, A nice story this is. It has a very interesting concept, with light fighting darkness. It's great to see how their powers work and what they can do ...

Hey Anadir, Because your secret santa didn't show up, I'm hear as a fill-in! Nice chapter here. I can't comment more on the story because I'm jumping in on the ...

Hi Skins, Just a little quick comment from me. I liked this chapter a lot! There is a time gap, which was a bit unexpected but I really like the ...

Hi HopelessAbandon, This is a short chapter. Fairly straight forward and it seems to be there to show how Hudson felt about things. I liked the ending to the chapter, ...

Hi there rishabh, Just for future notice, I don't get notifications when you reply to reviews. I only saw this chapter because I crossed it in the green room. If ...

Hi Sarah, Well this was an interesting Prologue. It has a good beginning which can map out the rest of the story. I think Andorra is an interesting character and ...