Deadman

I'll be honest, if your age at the top right corner is accurate, you are going to be a spectacular writer. I made perfect sense of your story, and it ...

Deadman here with a review for you. I'd first like to say that it was simply outstanding. My God you had me convinced that I was an addict! Your detail ...

So I'm sure you've been expecting this review, so here it is. You already know my whole story about its your piece not mine and blah blah blah so I'll ...

Well it's a short piece, but I can work with that. First thing that caught my attention was all the ratings, I was expecting an action filled piece. Also the ...

This is perhaps the most well written chapter you've put up. However, there is a small issue that keeps coming up in all of your works. You seem to be ...

I'm going to start his off by saying that the story line is progressing rather well. Along with that so is your writing. Of course there will be mistakes no ...

Very dark tone, dark indeed. This had me leaning forward in my seat. Can't tell if it's my fever or your story that sent a chill up my spine either. ...

Oooh, such a nice and warm tone at the start. Well Deadman here for your review today. First of I want to say welcome to YWS, and it's nice to ...

Deadman here for your review. I would have gotten to this sooner but I have been rather busy. I still love where this story is going and anticipate every chapter, ...

I will tell you this, I am loving the story. I was eagerly awaiting the third chapter and nearly lost it in the feed of the stories. There are errors ...

Time to hit you with a review! First off I'd like to say that this story was very interesting. However I figured out the plot really quick. Drag it out ...

Hello Jordanavitch, I was scrolling through and saw your piece today. I'd like to start off with how much I enjoyed it. Sure it's small, but it shows detail. It ...

Well Deadman here with a review for you. I'd like to start of with the good stuff. I very much enjoyed the piece and the plot. Your word choices where ...

Well first off I'd like to say it's good to see you writing again! Secondly, I find humor in this but that's probably because I've read your story "Bunnies are ...

Hello there, first I'd like to say I've never read "The Lottery", but it sounds interesting and I might go pick it up. Alright now onto the review. Overall I ...