Deadman

Deadman here with a review for you today! Well you didn't warn me it was bout death! :P Okay in all seriousness Death is something we have to live with, ...

Deadman here with a review for you today! First I'd like to ask why you think this is a lamentable attempt? I think it's beautiful. You matched the syllables properly, ...

Deadman here with a review for you today! This is clearly a piece straight from the heart. I can see it, and I can feel it. It's very emotional, and ...

Deadman here, boy I've got a review for you! Don't panic, it's a good thing really. Seems like a great story actually. I'm probably going to go bad and read ...

Hey Subtle it's Deadman here with a review for you. As I'm not the greatest with poems, you'll have to bare with me. I'd first like to say this is ...

Deadman here with a review for you today! First, welcome to YWS! If you need any help feel free to PM me and I'll be glad to help you. Second, ...

Deadman here with a review for you today! I'd like to start off with saying that this topic is a perfect topic. So many people have to, well as you ...

Well I can see you're trying to be voice full. I'll be honest though, until that last bit I was about to start yelling in this review box. I was ...

Deadman here with a review for you. I'm not the best with poems so bear with me. I don't want to come of as mean, but I'm a blunt person. ...

Amazing! I loved this piece. I could feel the emotions, I could see the images, I could feel the pain and suffering! Just brilliant! Deadman here with a review for ...

Good poem, and it is definitely love. I like this poem a lot, and might say to someone. Yeah right, she'd know it wasn't mine the second I started saying ...

Oooh a poem about death! Well, I don't know much about stanzas and all of that stuff, but this is the best way to learn for me. I can tell ...

Still loving the story, and got hit by a surprise. I expected the Robbers this chapter, whoop I was wrong! Lucrezia has already hit all of the nitpicks, so I'm ...

Okay, Yeah I wanted to read this one too! Well I'm caught up on the chapters, and I'm understanding the story perfectly now. (Okay I understand to an extent.) Well ...

Hi there! Oh my God I'm loving this story. (Guilty, I haven't read the first chapter yet, but I will!) This is so interesting, the language you are using makes ...