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Re: Circus Knife
Hey! Grim here, ready to s i n k my teeth into this new work by you! "Circus Knife"'s lyrics are as sharp as the knife that was in the ...
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Re: Castle of Queerosity: The Prologue
Greetings Mortal, Let's begin, yes? My favorite part: "There is one way you can break the curse. Have someone love you. The curse will take form of a great beast ...
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Re: Something's Not Right
Greetings Mortal, Let's begin, yes? My favorite part: The cliffhanger at the end! That shadowy creature is definitely going to give me goosebumps in my sleep. Also, the vivid imagery ...
Sep 20, 2024 -
Re: Circus Scene
Hi! Let's begin, shall we? My favorite part: "Shut up, who gave you permission to speak?"It's sassy, but it's also a powerful statement of autonomy and self-control. It's as if ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: The Moon And Stars By Alex Emery. Chapter One:
Gods, I relate to this so much. To get personal, as a non-binary person who's been navigating the choppy waters of identity for years, reading the first chapter of 'The ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: Hands Of The Sculptor
WOW, I love this story so much! It's like a dark twist on the "Pygmalion" myth where instead of a statue coming to life, we have a sculptor whose art ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: Circus Investor
Okay, to begin, WOW! I love this so much. The opening lines, "I’m sorry that you hate what I’ve built," stood out to me. It's like the speaker is saying, ...
Sep 17, 2024 -
Re: i want my personal space back
To begin with, this is a deeply emotional poem. I feel like so many people, including me, can relate to this on a level. My favorite line? "With my dirty ...
Sep 13, 2024 -
Re: I'm Cold
First of all, this is an overall yummy story. What I liked: -How the girl died (lol it sounds weird ik) -How psychotic the mother is -This reminds me of ...
Sep 11, 2024 -
Re: Zombies of Mariesville | Ten
Gosh, you are amazing at writing supernatural stuff! what I liked: - Luna's name lol, its just a nice name. -How you wrapped up the story, it reminded me of ...
Sep 11, 2024 -
Re: What’s lurking in school?
Okay, to begin with, WOW. What I liked: -The last line, gosh it sent a chill down my spine - How detailed the deaths were, I like gore. I could ...
Sep 11, 2024 -
Re: We, Cryptids Chapter Nine
Oh, where do I even begin with this charming little piece of text? The way it speaks about a child's innocent dreams of exploring the heavens above is truly heartwarming. ...
Dec 12, 2023 -
Re: The interesting life of Nova Sloane
Back Home, the first chapter of this story, seemed to set a wholesome tone for a young girl coming home from school. But quickly, the tone shifts to a kind ...
Dec 12, 2023 -
Re: The Interlude-Chapter 9 (Good Omens fanfic)-The Reunion (part 2)
Oh, what a beautiful and sensuous chapter we have here! I feel like I need to grab a fan and cool myself down after reading all of this spicy content. ...
Dec 12, 2023 -
Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 11.3 - Bon appétit: Serving Truth at Dinner
This text takes family drama to a whole new level! I mean, seriously, who needs reality TV when you have this kind of tension and verbal sparring? The characters in ...
Dec 12, 2023
