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Hey Basia, I really enjoyed your poem. Due to time constraints, I can't leave a full review; however, I wanted to make some comments. The poem seems very emotionally driven ...

I really dig the lyrics especially the climatic end, although it felt more like a poem then lyrics for a song. Please keep posting your writing!

I enjoyed the second chapter; it was nice to see Griffin's home life. Keep writing because I can't wait for it to really pick up.

Haha good one Razzy.

Haha excellent in every way, true and well written. Props, Day

Brilliant.

I didn't want to say what you did wrong or right, but just say that this is awesome! It's so cool you've been writing a novel, but you should have ...

Thanks for the reviews, and I fixed up all the issues that you guys found.

Ah! Yes, I was wondering if a fan of RA would drop by and read this. After rereading the piece it does seem much to familiar to Flanagan's masterpiece, and ...

First of all thank you a lot for the review I appreciate it! 1. Obviously didn't mean to use me instead of my, so hopefully I'll fix those soon. 2. ...

What Mad_moo said.

If you want a crazy book just like the Hunger Games than I suggest reading Battle Royale.

Thanks for the reviews guys! Obviously if this were ever a real book the chapter would have to be so much longer. That would include probably the next two "chapters" ...

I love it. *Liked*

Thanks for the Review! I really appreciate it... questions. I shall work on fixing those word issues (gym, multicolored, damper, etc) He actually does love Mr. Breezewood's class. I thought ...