Dawnpath1

It's quite easy once you get the hang of it. You write the traditional method.

I originally wrote it elsewhere. When I tried to copy and paste it, it didn't transfer well. And I don't always have internet, which is a bummer.

Woot, a little angry on the first bit. Allow me to clarify: I write poems for myself, this was one of them. I post themhere to get feedback on how ...

Gunna is not a mistake, it's more of a flavor word of preference for going to. Because this is poetry, it's fine. Commands is spelled with two m's. I'll see ...

Alright, well, I have no idea what hubristic stentor even means. And if I don't know it, I'm probably not going to use it. That's a typo, I'll fix it. ...

Says I have 5 reviews, can only see 1...

Thank you

Well, that was certainly gruesome. Anyway, since this is free verse, I guess it doesn't need a rhyme scheme, but it would help, and you could try to add a ...

It's not a story. It is simply losely connected thought. And I broke it that way on purpose. Did you notice how each time I started a new stanza the ...

'Tis gibberish guys. Literally whatever came out of my mind at 12 o'clock midnight.

Thanks for cathching that. I was typing fast because I had to be someplace that morning. *Thinks; If only I had a copy machine*

Thanks for the review. And the compliments; I haven't run this through word, and spelled everything the same as I had when I wrote it on paper. The caps inconsistencies ...

This is a common thing that people like to say; You're lines are broken, it's easy to fix, when ever you stumble, change the line. My response for now is; ...

:blush: Thanks Silleh ^^

I'm a little rusty, but here is my poetry. I wrote it just now and I haven't editted it. To say tha my dragon doesn't exist is a flat out ...