DavieB

A poem translation of this story The Sapling's Growth No one sees me from space Nor continent, nor country, not the large place Not from high mountain tops nor busy ...

Hi! This is D.B. First, welcome to YWS!! Second, this story was jaw-dropping with its descriptive language. I absolutely adored the way you emphasized the other senses even from the ...

Hello Divya! This is DB! What a great narrative! You were able to express an important and relatable message to readers in a short story. I loved the application at ...

I was left completely speechless. Your writing is beautiful!! This is D.B., and I am so thankful to have the pleasure of reading another amazing writer's art. First, you did ...

Hello FireEyes, This is D.B., and I loved reading this creative poem! While reading this I immediately thought of twin flames as almost star-crossed lovers. Your use of fire to ...

Hello NoOneInParticular! This is D.B., This story hits close to home, but also left me more at ease hearing another person write about that longing yet dreaded feeling of growing ...

Hello NoOneInParticular! This is D.B., I absolutely loved this read! You took one scene that has so many little moments that people tend to miss day-to-day, and made those moments ...

Hello Lolita18, D.B. here! First off, I think this draft is to a fantastic start. The reader is immediately drawn into the character's dream. What drew me in the most ...

Hi Ellie, This is D.B. I loved reading your short story. I was drawn in immediately, and could absolutely see myself reading more and finding out what happens to Robin ...