Davidmartin

Hey, Scar or Red! (I hope I'm right) I really liked this poem especially the softness of the narrative, for once I just couldn't find a parallel between between the ...

This sort of like a summer-day sonnet, Simple sweet and to the point. What I particularly liked about it was the way the frustration of the couple was slowly aggravated ...

I can almost hear a Parisian poet chanting this in a little cafe! Well done, I'm impressed. Though one thing I didn't like was the line 'I know, I know' ...

Hey Eraqio, brilliant poem you have here (I especially like it because it's almost as if it were written for me, I experience a lot of the same stuff!). The ...

Quite an emotional piece you've got here, it reminded me of that slow, merciless style of monologue in Robert Browning's poem 'My Last Duchess' Though the verse seems to be ...

Nice poem! It has good flow and the rhymes tie it up well. Though somehow your style doesn't seem to suit the topic, Goblins in a forest make you think ...

Hey, Amiemalamie, great story you have, a very popular topic and a strong fan base (it has the potential to become very popular very quickly). Though there were some discrepancies. ...

Exquisite. That is all I can think of. It's perfect, I can't think of a flaw. The way the fourth line of each verse sort of summarised the feeling of ...

I have rarely seen a poem as candid as this one, well done!!! Though there were some little details at the end, I can understand the little swear, it emphasises ...

Wow, quite a poem, it felt almost like listening to a song (you can almost imagin a travelling bard sing this on a lute) the lines had perfect continuity and ...

Hey MsBamaMeagan, quite a gem of poem you have here. The simple flow and honest expression is beautiful, it gave me the sort of feeling you get when you see ...

Hey Knightlyangel09, incredible poem! I love it! Honestly speaking I never thought I'd see a poem like this written again, the wording and excellent phrasing give it a sort of ...

Hey, poet!!! I love this poem. Frankly I used to be one of those people who believe that the art of poetry is in decline, but you proved me wrong. ...

Hi! I'm David. Nice story and good choice of topics (I love Greek mythology) There's nothing wrong grammatically as far as I can see, and I really think you should ...