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Re: Frost Lark News 7/30/17
You know, I go to a Yamaha music school. Hi! Survey time: a), because my baby cousin has the funniest laugh ever. It sounds like a duck crossed with a ...
Nov 12, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 8/6/17
Hi Sheytato! It's been a while since I reviewed a Frost Lark News. So, as usual this is 100% funny! I'm actually not watching the Disney channel right now, so ...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 5 of 'Jadeland'
I'm back for another review! I really like the bit about them needing a bad reputation. It's a really good subtle piece of humour. Also, it's funny how Tanya needs ...
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 4 of 'Jadeland'
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Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3 (part two) of 'Jadeland'
I'm back... In this chapter the reader can really sympathise with Yasmine, which is always a good element to a story. You also learn more about Tamara: she seems to ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3 (part one) of 'Jadeland'
Hey there! So, I like this chapter because it gives us a lot of information. Yasmine's nightmare gets you thinking. Clearly someone was after her and her mother, but who? ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 2 of 'Jadeland'
Hi, I'm back! So, I'll start with the nitpicks, of which there is only one: "No! Stop I " I screamed, struggling to no avail. The I should be an ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1 of 'Jadeland'
Hi! Just stopping by for a quick review. I really like this story and would love to read more of it! First of all, I like the professor being female. ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Contest Entry: The Chosen Grandma (first 1000 words, revised)
Danni here to review. FYI I would like the points as I have quite a lot of works I need to publish. Edna seems very calm about the fact a ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.2
Danni88 here for another review! So, another great story from The Chosen Grandma. That ending was really good, keeping your readers on the edge. I can't wait for the next ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.1
Hi, Danni88 here on this amazing Review Day! First of all, that was an amazing plot twist at the end. It inspires so many questions and makes the reader want ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.1
Hey! Danni88 here for a review! First of all, this is INCREDIBLY funny. A lot of books I have read have Chosen Ones in, but they are usually teenage boys ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: The Help o' your Readers
Hi! @Danni88 here to review your cool poem! The subject of this is so true, especially on YWS. If it wasn't for me and @Elijah and @snowmonkey9, you wouldn't know ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 4.2
Hi! Danni88 here to review this chapter! Sorry if it's a bit short, I would like to get this out of the Green Room. First of all, I really like ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Gardens of Eden (V.2) Chapter Five
This is a good chapter, but we need to know what Ivy is thinking and feeling a bit more, and I noticed quite a few grammatical errors. I don't understand ...
Jun 21, 2017