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Re: Azarel
Hi Lizzie! Danni here for a review! First off, I really sympathize with Naomi. She reminds me of myself: clever, speaks her mind. I HATE Lena for being such a ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Lyrical Chapter One: "Smile"- Mikky Ekko
Hi LJF! Danni here for a review! Let’s get this out of the Green Room. OK, so you have a pretty strong beginning here. Like @jemming17, I do think it ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: aishite
Hey nightmarenoodles! As requested, Danni here for a review! First off, love the idea. I like the italics. Adds a real feel to the work. Are they from a song? ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: Grim's Tales Of Heros and Halfwits Part 1
Hi, E.E! Danni here for a review! First off, this was lovely. Probably your best work. I love the idea. OK, nitpicks: "Y-your real?" "So, y-your not afraid of me? ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: Eyes Of Death: Chapter 1
Hi Adam! Danni here for a #SadPanda review! First off, WHOA DUDE PLOT HOLES. This chapter is far too rushed. So many things happen with little or no explanation between ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Summoning Persephone part 8
Hi Dreamworx95! Danni here for a #SadPanda review! First off, a very dignified opinion of the story: OH MY GOD I LOVE IT SO MUCH THIS IS AN AMAZING IDEA ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Ecliptic (WIP Need feedback, really short)
Hi Art! Danni here for a review! OK, let's get this out of the Green Room. #SadPanda First off, I was fine up to the point Malia got shot. Then ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Azarel
Hi Lizzie! Danni here for a quick #SadPanda review! I really sympathize with Naomi. She reminds me of myself - clever, sassy, speaks her mind. She doesn't deserve a brat ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Blake And Emma Chapter Two
Hi! Danni here for a #SadPanda review! First off, LOVE the oblivious dad. Easily the best part in the story. Props to you! OK, nitpicks: minuet That should be minute. ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Off Court - 10.2
Hi Bisc! Danni here for a #SadPanda review! Yay, time for the next chapter! First off, SO glad they sorted it out between them. They are such a cute couple ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: 0110001101101111011001000110010101100100
Hi! Danni here for a #SadPanda review! Firstly I have to say I was learning about binary in school today and it was really hard and I saw this and ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: The Persona
Hi! Danni here for a review! First off, I know who this is. The last line gave it away. Don’t want to spoil it for any people who don’t know, ...
Jan 19, 2018 -
Re: I want to be like Google
Hi! Danni here for a review! First off, love the “I’m feeling lucky!!!” line. That was pure genius. Second of all, I love the idea. This is a really lovely ...
Jan 19, 2018 -
Re: Stop, Your Breaking Me
Hi! Danni here for a review! First off, love the formatting. Good idea to emphasise the particular words. It really makes them stand out and show how the victim is ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
Haha! So funny! XD I love this. Props to you for having the brilliancy to invent such a ridiculous, fantastic, hilarious thing! I love the amazing end sentence and the ...
Jan 4, 2018