Dani965

Thankyou for the review

Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it! 1) Yes it is a book within a book type of thing and I must admit it was hard for me to describe this ...

Thankyou, and yes I couldn't really find a word that would rhyme well with cheek, I agree that it doesn't read well to.

Thankyou!

Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it and I see what you mean with some of the improvements!

Thankyou for the review and a stanza is like a paragraph in poetry.

This is really good. I like how it compares to a sort of fantasy world

This is really good, I love how you managed to show emotion within such a short poem. I also love how it shows a person or a thing asking for ...

I really like this, but don't forget it's not always the women being abused by men, it can also be the other way around!

Thankyou for the review I'm glad you liked it! I must admit the 'getting to the troposphere' part confused me aswell, so unfortunately I can't answer that very well. All ...

I love the rhyming in this, it really helps the poem flow.

I love how it rhymes

This is really good, it shows alot of emotion which I think some poetry needs more of and shows how people are suffering in ways we can't see or don't ...

It's impressive that you managed to link two languages together in the same poem, I would never be able to do that.

I think that a few of the paragraphs could be broken up to make a few more shorter ones. Other than that, this is an amazing story and I really ...