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Hi Kaykel, I'm not that familiar with the Match Girl story (It was a long time ago when I used to read those stories). But your story kinda lacked any ...

Ok... call me stupid, but what does ARC stand for? Anyways, you spelling and grammar pretty much checked out. Yay, another part to the story ( I read your first ...

Hi Dogs, I liked your story. It was funny and kept me reading. Just a few nitpicks: Freedom was so sweat I think you meant sweet see the devil her ...

Hi! I see someone's already gone over the nitpicks with you so I'll simply comment on my opinion. I liked it. It was crisp, clear, and to the point. It ...

Hey Kyllorac, Everyone else got the nit picks. I was just browsing through the "old" pages of YW and stumbled across your story. I wanted to let you know I ...

I see you haven't gotten a review yet. I get frustrated when no one reviews my writing. Anyways, I didn't read part 1 but I really enjoyed this. I felt ...

Bravo! No, I'm not trying to bug you by posting on every single one of your posts:) I really liked your poem. The rhythm was good and it flowed nicely ...

Ok, someone already got the nitpicks though I didn’t find any obvious ones while reading. I can tell you like writing about carnage. That was a pretty gruesome scene there ...

I read the first part of your story and I had to keep reading. There are only a few nit picks. I wouldn’t point them out at all except I’m ...

Here I go, your review from me. :lol: Anyways, if you don't like it: ignore it. :smt104 I've never watched Naruto so I don' t have anything to compare it ...

Ok, I kind of stink at reviews but I'll give it a shot. :oops: Skyler sat on her throne, preached (should be perched) on top of a very large elephant ...

I see you haven't had any reviews, and though I'm not really any good at doing them, I'll review your piece for you. I read it a while back so ...

Hey Merlin, I really enjoyed reading your short story. It didn't drag on and on and it kept me interested the whole time. I really liked the idea of the ...

Hey Kyllorac, I was thinking about entering the contest and wanted to sum up the competition. No, I'm joking. I was trying to think of a way to write about ...

Hey Shina, it's me:) I really liked your idea for a story, it sounds intriguing. I know it's kind of cliche' but maybe you could start your prologue out from ...