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Ok... call me stupid, but what does ARC stand for? Anyways, you spelling and grammar pretty much checked out. Yay, another part to the story ( I read your first part too) and now it's really started to pick up the pace a bit. Keep on at it and soon you'll have a novel
~Dakota