Cynder

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it :) It was brutal, yes, but I knew I really had to snag my readers in with some good hooks to get them to ...

Happy I could help. I'm not gonna say you need to do anything, because that's why you're a writer. So, keep writing, and strive to constantly improve.

Thanks! I wanted to inspire the element of Satan, but I didn't want to outwardly write it and offend someone who read my work. Besides, everyone's depression has a different ...

Haha, ok thanks :) I have a long way to go as a writer, but I'll take all the help I can get @wolfare1 Feel free to give advice as ...

Thanks again for all your help. I will go back and do my best to edit everything, and any PMs from you, @Wolfare1 or anyone else, with specific editing ideas ...

The north pole, sorry. The place in the world I meant. I need to reword that

Holy jesus @Wolfare1 ! Thank you so much for your support! Can I ask that you explain what you mean by an "ellipse?" Also, that prolouge is without many of ...

Thanks so much! I will edit it, certainly. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Haha, sorry to confuse you. I will fix the punctuation, definitely. This poem is about graduation. I had a friend that basically became family and at the endof graduation we ...

Holy god, that was amazing. You made me understand something very special, which is that she is not mad at him because she doesn't realize just how wrong it is. ...

Hey @theironnovelist ,its Cynder. Thought I should just say a few things, and don't worry they're not bad. Please keep writing, because as someone who knows nightmares, and knows that ...

haha ok! :)

Well, I can't argue with that. :D

Thanks! I will keep that in my mind, as I told @Wolfare1 I will continue to improve it:) That means a lot, my bff. I think you're the ray though, ...

Haha, thanks @Wolfare1 . I'm not sure how much of your review I agree with, however the main point stands out to me--that I can always improve. Thanks:)