CuteJackRussell

Hello artemis15sc, This is a very good poem, you really created a beautiful setting in which I saw in my mind. In each stanza you expressed a different feeling which ...

Hello shadeplet, I loved this and it's so true I can relate to what you are saying. You painted the picture for us, the reader, really well and this is ...

Hello jolene15, This wasn't a fantastic poem, it was good but not fantastic and I think you could improve this in many ways because it was just a it simple ...

Hello sunxkissedxme, I hate to repeat what the other to said but yes it is true, your rhyming could be improved. There were bits that worked and bits that just ...

Hello hopeispeace, I enjoyed reading this a lot it was powerful yet still easy to understand and I like how you used simile's as an effective language feature. It was ...

Hello cammie, I can find some obvious punctuation issues with this but I'm sure if you spend a little time looking over this and doing a few more editing checks ...

Hello DramaLlama, I absolutely loved this poem, it has a really good message and I love the meaning behind this. We all know how much Nate does but we don't ...

Hello Tarshni, Firstly I have a few nitpicks which are either underlined or in bold in the quoted poem below, because I found a few mistakes which made me scream ...

Hello cupcake, This is really nice and bubbly, it is full of energy and makes everyone happy. I like the simplicity of it because it is just a nice short ...

Hello Animallovermary, This was really good and I liked reading it. I thought it was very sweet and simple and expressed the feelings in your head in a good way ...

Hello SisterItaly, Firstly congratulations on the feature it is a really big acheivement and you should be proud of yourself. Now I have a few nitpicks that screamed to me ...

Hello jenmarie, I think this is a really interesting introduction to the topic that definitely encourages the reader to keep on reading. It is a very good place to end ...

Hello iampaulop, I'm here to review as promised! Although this is a little off topic I would just like to say that you were very clever to put up the ...

Hello there, I actually really liked this, I think it is a very pure and powerful poem that captures the moment and creates great imagery. It is layed out nicely ...

Hello there, I liked this but it was very long and not very well layed out. I would rearrange this if I were you and perhaps break the body of ...