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:D Ya I thought it would be terrible because its my first thing I ever posted onYWS

Wow, thanks Craz! I love the ideas! Also this is my first thing I ever posted on YWS, so I am really excited to start a new one. Farwell Craz! ...

Thank you! This is my first poem ever on YWS. Thanks!

Wow! Thanks a lot! I realized things that I forgot! Farwell! Curosity227

Thanks Chanta! These inspiring words make me feel like I can write better already!

Your welcome! And if there are people out in this world who don't like this, ignore them because this is a beautiful piece. Farwell, TimmyJake! Curiosity227

Kagome, Ammmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is AAAAAMMAAAAAZZZZIIIIIINNNNGGGG

Oops sorry about the long gap

I would say a lovely sad story. I think its wonderful

Hello. I love this poem. Very nice. Although here is some advice. don't REPEAT cowgirl to much. I know that's sorta the whole point of poems, but if you repeat ...

Hey Jerrell47, I hope I will also. But I think we can become better by using this great story to start to write something this good.

Your welcome. I am glad someone else here is new, because I thought I was the only one.

Hello. I really like this. But here is some advice. Don't be to complicated. I am pretty sure you can summarize this. Besides that, incredible. I like all the detail, ...