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Okay, so this is a good start. It got my attention with the action and seemed interesting. It's another dystopia--all the rage, those--but it does seem to be, at least, ...

Um, sorry to be harsh, but I have absolutely no idea what is going on in this piece. It's all jumbled together and some of the action seems out of ...

One word: Gorgeous. Now, admittedly for the second time today, I'm going to have to be a "bad" reviewer. I can't say much more than I really liked this and ...

Okay, hi, your friendly reviewer here. Now, I'm going to give you some tips, okay? First off, this is not a normal structure for poetry. A poem tends to go ...

Okay, so. I'm going to be a "bad" reviewer and basically just say I love this. I mean, really. I generally dislike unusual lowercase in poetry (I know, I know, ...

Okay, so. This is, well, cliche. Sorry, not trying to be rude or mean, but it does have some pretty big issues. I'll say, though, that I did like the ...

Nice job keeping rhyme scheme. Always a little impressed with that. It definitely gave it a beat. However, the actual substance of the poem is a little confusing to me. ...

Um, okay. So, I was looking for short stories with interesting names and yours caught my interest. Unfortunately, I've noticed, eh, a couple of problems. 1. It all runs together. ...

Holy heck. o.o Well, that was--intense. Surprising. Interesting. Now I want to know more. Seriously, this could be a preface or prologue. Admittedly, it stands alone fine--but, unlike in response ...

Very interesting piece. I liked the sword-fighting description quite a bit--I'm a sucker for action, since I'm more of a literary elements and deep conversations sort of writer. However, there ...

Interesting. A story about a psychic, I assume? Could be curious. I like the opening style. Sort of eerie, almost. However, some points are a bit fuzzy--practice writing your action ...

First Response: Interesting. Would probably keep reading. However, cliches. Red hair. /Curly/ red hair. (Not normally bothersome--I like red hair--but recently so-many-red-haired-people-in-YA. Just FY

First impression (based off first paragraph): Catches me pretty good. I like how it starts in media res. I get a feel for the character from how I see Lady ...

Nice job! While I don't exactly have much sympathy for the characters yet (but I'm probably some sort of emotionless weirdo, so don't mind me), I really want to read ...

Hey! I quite liked this. Of course, my bias, since I'm still a pretty strong Warriors fan, could be totally showing, but so far it seems interesting. I'm already interested ...