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Dude. Seriously. This is amazement. I write free verse because I am fairly terrible at structured poetry and rhyming, and you have completely blown my mind. I wish I had ...

TRIGGER WARNINGS GALORE. Um. Okay. I'm afraid I don't know if I'll be too helpful, but I'm counting this as a review anyway because I feel like it is. First ...

I enjoyed this piece. Once or twice I felt pulled away, but in general I felt the emotion of it. It came in ripples and waves, however, rather than steadily ...

Okay, so my first suggestion? Listen to the people below. I know it's sometimes hard to take criticism, but they all made great points. I felt basically nothing. I have ...

So, I find the poem interesting. It is a mix of varied ideas all pulled together by a common thread (I imagine this as a bunch of porcelain figures hanging ...

Bit confused on what point of view this is from. The bride, I presume? Or the old woman's daughter? Don't get why she's exactly singing at the wedding either, but...I ...

Good show. While the beginning seemed a little repetitive, I really began to...feel something for the characters. I kept reading because I liked them, more so than anything. I wanted ...

So, this was rather good. It was very simplistic in message and nearly, hmm, repetitive, but you explained things in an interesting way. However, I have to say that things ...

Okay, this is beautiful. I would say this is almost like prose poetry or, say, certain stand-alone books by Tim Bowler. It definitely spoke to me and felt sort of ...

Okay, so I really liked this. It had an excellent rhythm, a nice steady beat. I assume that's because you used four lines per stanza. Its message was clear. Every ...

I quite liked this. In a few words, you managed to capture a haunting idea, the idea of something dark and painful that exists in a realm none can see ...

Okay, so this was interesting enough. I got a feel of, well, depression. Sadness. Pinch of anger. Something like rapture, but maybe closer to rupture. Something's broken. That's good. That ...

So, I liked this. It seemed pretty, but in a sort of shallow way. It's like the always-gorgeous girl, sort of confused in the corner; not the suddenly-gorgeous girl up ...

Okay. Decent poem. It was pretty and a little like a children's poem. I enjoyed it. However, I noticed a certain problem with the grammar/punctuation in a few places. Second ...

Very nice. Got a good sense of what the poem was about. Crystal clear. It could do with a bit more emotion to it. It's about death. About a beloved ...