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Crysi

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dare to dream

    *laughs* Yup, that's it.

    May 27, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a tribute to a friend

    This is good. I like it. It seems to capture addiction pretty well and the way you lose yourself in it. I wouldn't know either. But from what I know ...

    May 27, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: SOS

    I get it. It's really good. I like the imagery. Very cute.

    May 26, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: THE TALE OF THE DRAGON JEWELS

    Pay attention to grammar, as well. Please.

    May 19, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: the tears that fall- the perfection of a woman in love

    I love it. It's absolutely beautiful!

    May 18, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Collaboration(Hunter Helped)

    That's really cool! I like it. Reminds me of my freewrite.

    May 14, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Freewrite--"the Break"

    Of course he's obsessed with her, TBR.. Hunter, you know how I feel about this poem. I love the writing but hate the meaning behind it. I'm always here for ...

    May 13, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: aquaphobia

    I really really like this, Jack. Great imagery.

    May 13, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Pendragon series

    Apr 28, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Animal Farm

    I finished reading it a few weeks ago. It was really good, in my opinion, and it really helped me to understand what really occurred. I'm doing a project on ...

    Apr 28, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: how many times (13+)

    I agree with Mesh. Exactly what she said. Beautiful.

    Apr 17, 2005
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shall we Dance? (13+ for profanity) /P

    I love you Brad. This is so beautiful and it's really cute. It makes me smile. :)

    Apr 17, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chronicles of Taer: Prologue - Chapter 2

    Well, the problem with that is that I'm trying to have the story focus on just one person. Malkin doesn't know how the others feel.. But I might try something ...

    Mar 24, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of Taer

    Tara, you're amazing. I can't thank you enough! And yeah, punctuation was left out, which really irritates me lol. Legondre, yes, Malkin is important here.. but he actually isn't the ...

    Mar 24, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chronicles of Taer: Prologue - Chapter 2

    *sigh* I know, I know. It's predictable. But it's supposed to be kinda minor.. Ah well. I'll work on it. Thanks!

    Mar 5, 2005


Every first draft is perfect, because all a first draft has to do is exist.
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