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Wow, seriously well done. This is one of my favorite pieces on yws!. I don't think there were any mistakes. You had me hanging on the first word. PLEASE write ...

WOW, I really loved this poem. I liked the way it rhymed and it flowed well. well done :D :D :D

Ha Ha Ha :D :D :D :D :D :D This really made me get in touch with my inner emo. Seriously well done, real funny

Killing His perfectly formed carcass lay exposed to the breezes, like vultures, that clawed against my clothes. Two bullets traced staccato tunnels through his delicate, textured skin. His eyes stayed

Hey! Please don't ever write anything like this again, your going to make me cry! :smt010 This poem was brilliant, and so, so sad. It reminds me of Bella and ...

Wow, Seriously WOW. I really liked the way you told the poem from a child's point of view. It was a really effective poem. Well done. Poor Jesus. Well done, ...

Whoa, This poem is seriously creepy. There's something scarily realistic about it too. You made a few spelling mistakes. I've read alot of suicide poems but this is more realistic, ...

Hey, Well done, this poem was very good, I think you could have done better though. It really is like a poetic prayer. The only line I didn't get was ...

Hey, Well done this poem is really beautiful. Very poetic and romantic. The last two lines were especially effective. I really enjoyed reading it. It's like something out of a ...

Really good. Well done this poem is very descriptive and emotional. I really enjoyed reading it. Very poetic. Well done and please keep writing. :smt038 :smt039 :smt027 :smt045 :D :smt010 ...

Hey, I LIKED THE FEELING IN THIS POEM. It was good. Just a few things. I find it hard to move around. I find myself constantly looking over my shoulder. ...

Hey, I really liked this poem. It was very descriptive. I nearly drowned once so you described it pretty well!. It was really beautiful. You asked not to comment on ...

Hey, I love haiku's so I had to comment. Well done it's not always easy to write haikus. Very effective although I'm not so sure about the last line. Like ...

Hey, I agree with the others, it was a realy sweet poem and younger readers would enjoy it. I think it might have been more effective if it rhymed a ...

Cool I'm first to review! Well damn, I hate you for writing that poem because it's amazing how true it is. I really, truly loved it. It was really good. ...