Crimsona

Hey there. I love this poem, I love the words, the description and the scene. But most of all, I love how misleading it is at first, how you expect ...

I love this, it's great! It's short, sweet, doesn't drag on, and pure greatness (if that's a word). The only thing I spotted was He kisses my stained red lips ...

Hey, this is great! I loved the word choice and the way it flowed, I liked the repetition, but I think that maybe less lines could improve it. I don't ...

Wow. All I can say is wow. This poem is really... touching. If you understand what I mean. The last line especially, I really, really like. I tried to see ...

Hey there! I loved these lyrics, I think my favourite line was 'Your World's a white cloud.' I really loved that. Some of the lines don't quite flow properly, but ...

Hey there! I really like this poem, it actually summed up the past week for me in many ways... So I just had to write a quick review on it! ...

Hey there. I really like this piece, I find that it flows well and I thought the word choice was great. However, I did get a little confused at this ...

I really like what you have done with this poem so far. But if you would like some critique, here it is; I miss you I love my wife so ...