I miss you

I really like what you have done with this poem so far. But if you would like some critique, here it is;

I miss you

I love my wife so much so dear, i miss the way she whipped my tear.

I like the simpleness of the first three words.
i, should be switched to I, and you may want to change whipped, to wiped.

Her voice was sweet like a Humming Bird, a voice so pure like i never herd.

I think that this is my favourite line, I love how you compare the wife's voice to a Humming Bird, however, you may need to change the i to I. And herd, to heard.
Although I do have some issue with the 'like I never heard', this is because the line sounds slightly awkward. Maybe you could change it to 'A voice so pure like I've never heard'. Apart from that, it's brilliant!

Her eyes were delightful like a fairy scene, Her eyes were delightful like a fairy scene, so pretty so charming so lightly green.

This line confused me slightly. It might be because it's 1am, or just because I'm not very experienced in reading poetry. Also you may want to add comma's here:
Her eyes were delightful like a fairy scene; so pretty, so charming, so lightly green.
I do very much like the part 'so pretty, so charming, so lightly green'. It sounds really fresh and happy.

Overall, I really like this poem, apart from some of the slight grammatical issues. I really do think that you should finish it. I certainly look forward to reading the finished item if you do.